Help yet again with new card.

[smbspo]

qalegh "I see you." My fellow Klingons, might I ask your wisdom in yet another translation.
I would like to add another card to the mix for my website. Any help would be honored.

This is the Text

Spoils of Evil
Instant
For each artifact or creature card in an opponent’s graveyard, add (1) to your mana pool and you gain 1 life.
“Virtue has its rewards, as does its opposite.”
—Lim-Dûl, the Necromancer

petaH 'ej peQap! "You (plural) succeed!"
Steve HIqqIj "Black Ale" Borders

[Kesvirit]

As no one else has yet accepted the challenge you present, here is my stab at the target. I did a lot of paraphrasing because tlhIngan Hol lacks much of the necessary vocabulary.

Spoils of Evil
Instant
For each artifact or creature card in an opponent’s graveyard, add (1) to your mana pool and you gain 1 life.
“Virtue has its rewards, as does its opposite.”
—Lim-Dûl, the Necromancer

becomes:

• Spoils of Evil
  {tev mIgh}
  
  [li]Instant
  {DuH}
  
  [li]For each artifact or creature card in an opponent’s graveyard, add (1) to your mana pool and you gain 1 life.
  
  
  • Find a thing-playing-piece  in an opponent's graveyard  and/or  find an animal-playing-piece in an opponent's graveyard.
    {yItu'  DochQuj'ay'  ghol HeghyotlhDaq     qoj    yItu' HaDI'baHQuj'ay' ghol HeghyotlhDaq}
    
    [li]Your  power accumulator adds one.
    {wa'         chel       HoSvI'cwI'lIj}
    
    [li]Gain one life.
    {wa' yIn chel}
  [li]"Virtue rewards, non-virtue rewards."
  {<<ghob popwI' ghobbe' popwI'>>}
  
  [li]— Lim-Dûl, the Necromancer
  {-- HeghpIn'a'wI' Lim-Dûl}

becomes:
{tev mIgh
DuH
yItu'  DochQuj'ay'  ghol HeghyotlhDaq     qoj    yItu' HaDI'baHQuj'ay' ghol HeghyotlhDaq. wa'         chel       HoSvI'cwI'lIj. wa' yIn chel.
<<ghob popwI' ghobbe' popwI'>>
-- HeghpIn'a'wI' Lim-Dûl}

I must caution you that I am a mere beginner, and recommend that you have this verified/corrected by a speaker with more knowledge and experience before committing it to a card.

Do you have an image to which you can link?

-=- Kesvirit
 

[Abbot Nej vIt]

Kesvirit,

I am No Klingon Grammarian, but it looks Pretty Reasonable?

[smbspo]

Kesvirit, Thank you for your help!!!! That is awsome, and here it is so you can see the finished product.

I am in your debt!
Steve HIqqIj "Black Ale" Borders

http://www.geocities.com/fakemagiccards/foreigncards that will get you there.