Would appreciate some feedback

[chuS ugh]

I've made a couple of videos of Klingon songs my band does--one original and one from TNG series.  Would love to have any feedback as that would especially help us as we're developing more arrangements of songs from the series as well as original material.  Caveats--yes, I understand that the Klingon Victory Song is not particularly grammatical, and yes we're still working on our pronunciation and diction (any specific tips on the latter would also be appreciated).

Here is the Klingon Victory Song:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3PDY7qtTsVw

And our tune, "be' joy' Lukasa"
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Igaq_qNZVYg

Notes about each song included in the description for anyone interested.

Many thanks!

chuS'ugh

[qurgh_]

The "Klingon Victory Song" was never grammatical. I never even ment anything. It's sad that Paramount would get Okrand to do Qoy qeylIS puqloD, but not any of the other Klingon songs.

If you need any help with translations or pronunciation let me know. Other past few months I've gotten pretty good at recording Klingon audio for others to learn pronunciation from.

[j'onn]

Really appreciate the offer, qurgh--and really sorry I didn't get a chance to meet you at Starbase Indy.  Hope the opening night of the Klingon Christmas Carol went well. 

I'll very likely take you up on the offer once we start getting our Klingon "Ballet" libretto drafted--thanks!