tlhIngan Hol nIDtaH jIH

[torqey]

torqey jIH (Translation: I am torqey)

tlhIngan Hol nIDtaH jIH (Translation: I am trying Klingon)

lugh'a' mu'tlheghvam (I couldn't decide whether to put 'a' after mu'tlheghvam or after lugh. It's supposed to say: This sentence be correct?)

mu'tlheghvam yIlugh (Translation: You correct this sentence!)

Qapla' (Translation: Success!)

[jIHaD]

Two things:

mu'tlhegh cha'DIch
nIDtaH jIH should be vInIDtaH. (You don't really need the pronoun, since it's implied by the verb prefix.)

mu'tlhegh loSDIch
lugh means "to be correct" or "to be right."
If you're trying to say "Correct this sentence," you'll need the causative suffix, -moH.
lughmoH would mean "to cause to be correct," "to make right," or just "to correct."

[torqey]

Is this right?

torqey jIH

tlhIngan Hol vInIDtaH

lugh'a' mu'tlheghvam

mu'tlheghvam yIlughmoH

Qapla'

(So was lugh'a' mu'tlheghvam  correct?)

[jIHaD]

Is this right?

torqey jIH

tlhIngan Hol vInIDtaH

lugh'a' mu'tlheghvam

mu'tlheghvam yIlughmoH

Qapla'

(So was lugh'a' mu'tlheghvam  correct?)

lugh Hoch. majQa'.

[torqey]

lugh Hoch. majQa'.
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